Wednesday 29 February 2012

Next installment.

Thanks Bonio23, either my mother, or my step father... :D i had totally forgotten to post more of my story. So here it is. For copyright reasons, i will not post it in sucession, dont want people taking credit for it. :) Atm, it is 31 pages long. :D this time, missed out a paragraph.

' The rain pummeled down, soaking through skin and clothing alike. Emma ran across the castle courtyard, and halted under an overhang. She hated rain, it made her feel wet, and miserable.
 She shivered, and wrapped her arms tightly around her chest. She wanted to be inside, she should be inside. Talking to the guest's. laughing with them. But to do that she would have to step out of the dry,  and get wet. Why must it rain when she wore a dress? It was impracticable, and restricting. Her brown hair, recently washed, and now washed once more by the rain, clung to her cheeks in a soggy tangle, her dress clung to her slim figure, she hated being exposed like this.
 The rain lightened for a moment, and Emma heard laughter bubbling from the hall. She wanted to cry, she was hungry, and cold, her clothes were soggy, and her skin soaked. She couldnt go to the party now, not like this.
 She looked back across the courtyard, back to her room then. But that would mean getting even more wet. Could they not have held the party in the dinner room? Instead of a hall only accesable by guests from the outside? The rain had been unexpected, and sudden, and being late to the party, she was punished by it.
 Emma glanced around the courtyard, she would have to dash for her door, there was no sheltered way to her rooms, until she was inside.'

I beleive that is enough. :D enjoyed it? Good. Didnt? Tough luck. Lol, no rly, i love you guys, you know that right?

X Bex

2 comments:

  1. Becky, the stories are really good. I think you could be a published writer you know! Keep up the good work. xx

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  2. thanks. But at the moment, this is only paragraph 3 of one of my stories, i have 2 going at the moment. Lol. :D
    I apprecciate your support.
    X

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